The introduction to this question is very strong and wastes no time in getting in to the analysis - which is exactly what you should do! However, it is worth referencing camera here and how the shot selection reinforces the meaning connoted via sound.
I suggest using this space between paragprah 1 and 2 to add a section dedicated to the lack of music and the Coen brothers' decision to not include a non-diegetic score because it would force the spectator to pay more attention when decoding the film
Nit-picking - paragraph two - use 'temporal' and 'spatial' in place of 'time' and 'place' - this is more academic language and would demonstrate a deeper level of engagement with the…
The introduction to this question is very strong and wastes no time in getting in to the analysis - which is exactly what you should do! However, it is worth referencing camera here and how the shot selection reinforces the meaning connoted via sound.
I suggest using this space between paragprah 1 and 2 to add a section dedicated to the lack of music and the Coen brothers' decision to not include a non-diegetic score because it would force the spectator to pay more attention when decoding the film
Nit-picking - paragraph two - use 'temporal' and 'spatial' in place of 'time' and 'place' - this is more academic language and would demonstrate a deeper level of engagement with the…